Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Please don't throw me in Jail!

Please don’t throw me in Jail!

Hi, my name is William Rich. I am sad to say this, but I not rich. I can’t even pay the

King back the three dollars I owe him. So I got thrown in jail because I couldn’t pay him

Back. Here’s how it happened. One day in 1824, I was walking around and my stomach

started to growl really loud. I new I was starving. I hadn’t even eaten in three days. So I

thought I’d go borrow some money from the King. Bad choice, it turns out that if you

borrow money from the King you must pay him back by the next week. Or, he’ll send

his guards after you and they’ll bring you to him. Then he can lock you in jail, but I

borrowed money from him anyway. So I took the money and bought a little food with it.

A week had past and I still didn’t have any money, so I tried to hide. Suddenly, the

guards found me hiding in my house, the dumpster. So they took me to the King and the

King locked me in jail. A month had past and I was in my cell. Suddenly, an angel came

down and she told me ………..

TO BE CONTINUED…

By: Jesse

2 comments:

Mrs. Perrey said...

Jesse you still need to add your picture to your blog!

¤(¯`.×♥ηι¢σℓє said...

i thoughtn it was funny that he was trown into jail cause he didn't pay him back 3 dollars. And also how you left the readers in suspense.

I think you could describe a little more.